The Eifel tower paris !! I went too paris with my mom , dad , sister, brother , aunt , aunt , my causin , and my other cauin that live there ...
I like very much paris because it has many turistic places and have museums like the luive museum it's very big and have very amaizing things .,it has a shop place that is called corte ingles it is very nice !! I bought many things like perfum , cloth ,and many accesories .
In the Eifel tower my aunts and my mom didn't went up because they were sacared
I only went to the 3 floor because I went up by stairs , and by stairs we can only go to the 3 floor
there are 4 floors , It's a very nice place I like it alot !!In the top it has an radio antenna At night it has lights (stars and blue lights )
I love it is a very nice place , it is locatet very well and is a very good turistic place
I LOVE IT !!!!!AND I HOPE I CAN GO AGAIN TO VISIT MY CAUSING
5 comments:
hi Mariana:
You had some grammar errors to correct. You write many important things and good information so we can know with who you went there
Manana,
Your descriptions is very nice , I think you like very much Paris and that you have a very nice time , I will like to go to Paris too they say that is a beautiful place
and they have very delicious food
I hope I go someday
Lov..
♥-MaKa-♥
manana:
your article is nice ans complete. M y article was too of Paris and I whent to the third flour , I was scared about the forth. I love to Paris , but the place I liked the most was the Eiffel Tower....
lov....
Hi I think your information was very interesting correct some spelling I like very much your text and I want to go there.I understand all your text congratulations.
manana :
your article is very organized complete and coherent ...
congratulations you make it very good continue like that I love u m,afe
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